I agree with nofool. The style is wildly schizophrenic, and not particularly elucidating.
The 'layperson friendly' similes are not used in such a way as to explain the technical jargon used elsewhere in the article. They seem mostly to be there just to emphasize the points you're trying to make, and so much so too. The whole article is a…
I agree with nofool. The style is wildly schizophrenic, and not particularly elucidating.
The 'layperson friendly' similes are not used in such a way as to explain the technical jargon used elsewhere in the article. They seem mostly to be there just to emphasize the points you're trying to make, and so much so too. The whole article is a weird mix of bold, italics, bold italics, constant ellipses, frequent headers, picture quotes, mini lists, and graphics. It's hard to take seriously, and comes off more as a rant.
You also start by trying to discredit the reader on the first page (I'd quote the paragraph for more clarity, but the article isn't written in paragraphs). Your alternating between thirsty-self-congratulatory and then kneejerk-defensive responses in this comment section just drives home the frenzied theme and distaste for the reader.
I'm far from a long covid denier.
However since your thesis amounts to you explaining to me that "not only is the sky falling, it has already fallen on you and %75 of the people you know, you all just don't even know it" perhaps coming off as a little more staid would go a long way to help convince me you're not overreacting. Are 7th grade textbooks written in such lunatic prose? For now, I'm just going to have to keep reading about the topic elsewhere.
Hi, I was the the grassroots strategist for the Bernie/Progressive movement from 2016 - 2020 ... I admit I am a bit jumpy but for some reason these folks just keep showing up to attack me... weird, right? Totally, I know.. anywho, me talking like this is probably driving you crazy because you are what is known as a "Binary mind"... Ikr, crazy... you believe that certain things must fit in a specific form... probably just bitterness from when that individuality you used to have was erased from you by whatever trauma you experienced.
I cannot make a clearer point right now than we are in this together.
The world is on fire, people are dying every day, things are getting overwhelming and that can be a lot.
So whether I like you or people in general has no bearing on whether I believe that people should have the right to enjoy life to the maximum potential
If that potential for you means, reading my article and trying to reinforce the idea that you are still better than me, even though that was not my goal and its not a competition... then have at it.
I agree with nofool. The style is wildly schizophrenic, and not particularly elucidating.
The 'layperson friendly' similes are not used in such a way as to explain the technical jargon used elsewhere in the article. They seem mostly to be there just to emphasize the points you're trying to make, and so much so too. The whole article is a weird mix of bold, italics, bold italics, constant ellipses, frequent headers, picture quotes, mini lists, and graphics. It's hard to take seriously, and comes off more as a rant.
You also start by trying to discredit the reader on the first page (I'd quote the paragraph for more clarity, but the article isn't written in paragraphs). Your alternating between thirsty-self-congratulatory and then kneejerk-defensive responses in this comment section just drives home the frenzied theme and distaste for the reader.
I'm far from a long covid denier.
However since your thesis amounts to you explaining to me that "not only is the sky falling, it has already fallen on you and %75 of the people you know, you all just don't even know it" perhaps coming off as a little more staid would go a long way to help convince me you're not overreacting. Are 7th grade textbooks written in such lunatic prose? For now, I'm just going to have to keep reading about the topic elsewhere.
So long, and thanks for all the links.
Hi, I was the the grassroots strategist for the Bernie/Progressive movement from 2016 - 2020 ... I admit I am a bit jumpy but for some reason these folks just keep showing up to attack me... weird, right? Totally, I know.. anywho, me talking like this is probably driving you crazy because you are what is known as a "Binary mind"... Ikr, crazy... you believe that certain things must fit in a specific form... probably just bitterness from when that individuality you used to have was erased from you by whatever trauma you experienced.
I cannot make a clearer point right now than we are in this together.
The world is on fire, people are dying every day, things are getting overwhelming and that can be a lot.
So whether I like you or people in general has no bearing on whether I believe that people should have the right to enjoy life to the maximum potential
If that potential for you means, reading my article and trying to reinforce the idea that you are still better than me, even though that was not my goal and its not a competition... then have at it.
tell me how you really feel